英语(一)大作文

第一段:简要描述图片,略微引向主题


思路一:传统写法

层次1:标题文字翻译

Under the appearance of the cartoon is/lies a_____(instructive) scene that(+完整句子)

Emerging from the cartoon is a _____ scenario that...

凑字数:Simple as the picture is, its symbolic meaning is profound and thought-provoking.)

层次2:简要描述图片

自己写,方法:散句整合——分词短语做状语

层次3:图片内容总结

It is obvious that...

例:【2013年第一段传统写法】

(1)Emerging from the cartoon is an instructive scenario that (2) facing four choices—striving for further study, hunting for a job, going abroad and starting a business, a group of graduates cease their steps, wondering and pondering where to go. (3) It is obvious that graduates don't know how to choose after they leave their college.

思路二:反问共鸣法

层次1:反问共鸣

Have you ever thought......?(陈述语序)

替换thought:seen, experienced,...(过去分词形式)

层次2:引向主题

If so, you may understand ...... in the picture.

If so, you may find the situation in the picture not uncommen.

You would be impressed by this picture

层次3:细节相连

As is seen,......

【例:2005年第一段反问共鸣法】

(1)Have you ever thought you might be abandoned by your children when you are old?(2) If so, you may understand the misery and helplessness of the aged father in the picture.(3) As is seen, keeeing their goal, these four children are trying to kick away their poor and aged father who is curling like a ball in the center of the football field.

【例:2013年第一段范文共鸣法】

(1)Have you ever thought how you will choose when you graduate? (2)If so, you may understand the confusion of those graduates in the picture. (3)As is seen, facing four choices—striving for further study, hunting for a job, going abroad and starting a business, a group of graduates cease their steps, wondering and pondering where to go.

第二段:点明图片寓意,具体阐述论证(利弊分析、意义分析、范例分析、原因分析、后果分析)


社会风尚、箴言哲理类:化苍白为哲理

层次1:哲理引入

What the cartoon conveys can be summarized as a motto/principle/truth: 

What a wise man once put happens to be the implication of the cartoon:

The implication of the cartoon can be abstracted as a simple truth:….

层次2:阐述哲理

In other words, ......

To put it another way, ......

层次3:充实论据——范例分析

自己写

层次4:得出结论

No wonder the author of the cartoon intends to remind us that…..

【例 2013年第二段】

(1)The implication of the cartoon can be abstracted as a simple truthsuitable and reasonable choice make success. (2)To put it another way, reasonable choice is essential quality in our life. (3) The past 30 years has witnessed an increasing emphasis on the virtue. For example, according to a survey published online, more than 80% people, especially those with great achievements, attribute their success to making a suitable and reasonable choice at the crucial stage in life. (4) No wonder the author of the cartoon intends to remind us that “no confusion, but making suitable choice”.


社会弊病类:化立论为驳论

层次1:大众观点(社会没有弊病)

It is widely accepted that….

It is generally acknowledged that….

层次2:提出质疑(真的是这样吗?)

Is this point/view the truth?

Is this point of view applicable/practical?

层次3:充实论据(写社会弊病)

Cases against this point are abundant, but the following ones will suffice. It is unsurprising that......

层次4:得出结论(社会真的存在弊病)

Evidently, ….. is fading away from us, which is poisonous to …..(人,家庭,社会,国家), let alone …..

【例:2005年第二段】

(1)It is generally acknowledged that as the development of the civilization, the seniors are enjoying their old life. (2)Is this point/view the truth?(3)Cases against this point are abundant, but the following ones will suffice.It is unsurprising that some adults still depend on their infirm parents financially and mentally, others are unwilling to take the responsibility of support parents, and still others even abuse their parents. (4)Evidently, the virtue of supporting parents is fading away from us, which is poisonous to our family, let alone the harmony of the society.(个人、家庭、社会、国家)

第三段:根据上文论调,态度决心对策


社会风尚、箴言哲理类:态度决心

层次1:困惑

层次2:启发

层次3:态度决心

层次4:展望

【例:2013年第三段】

(1)I used to wonder and ponder whether I can make a reasonable choice at crucial stage in my life? (2) With the enlightenment from the cartoon that it is merit to make suitable choice, (3) I am determined to spare no effort to cultivate this virtue. (4) Therefore, with the good fortune from suitable and reasonable choice, I(our society) can proceed more smoothly and realize my(its) dreams more rapidly.

社会弊病类:对策

外控:

1. 法律法规:Corresponding laws and regulations should be carried out (to do sth…)

    校纪校规:Disciplines and school regulations 

2. 处罚:Penalties or fines should be adopted/ enacted.

3. 媒体监督:Supervision from the mass media should be placed on….

4. 官方干预:official intervention should be put on ….

    校方干预:Intervention from school authorities

5. 社会规范:New social norms should be set up/ established to do sth. 

内控:

1. 自律自控:self-discipline, self-control,self-regulation, self-restriction

2. 意识:The awareness of …….should be cultivated/ advocated by families, schools and official media. 

3. 态度:The right attitude should be cultivated by….

【例:2103年第三段】

(1)We are supposed to draw the problem to an end, but how? (2)It is suggested by many we need a package deal, involving official intervention, supervision from the mass media and new social norms (+短语). (3)But is this deal comprehensive enough?Actually, we also need a compensating method: the awareness of supporting parents should be cultivated/ advocated by families, schools and official media. (4)With all the measures reinforcing each other, we can definitely put an end to the problem.

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