Chapter16 Business Writing
writing in your job
1.conducive[kən'dju:.sɪv]
Children , and staff, must work in an atmosphere that is conducive to learning.
providing the right conditions for something good to happen or exist 有利的,有助的,有益的
例:Such a noisy environment was not conducive to a good night's sleep.
仿:A good school has conducive atmosphere for studying.
2.vanish without trace
消失得无影无
The thief ran quickly and vanished without trace.
3.crutch
I told them not to use the special vocabulary of education as a crutch, almost any subject can be made accessible in good English.
1.a stick with a piece that fits under the arm, which you lean on for support if you have difficulty in walking because of a foot or leg injury (腿脚受伤的人使用的)T形拐杖
something that provides help and support and which you depend on, often too much (常指过度的)依靠,支撑,支柱only singular often disapproving
例:As an atheist, he believes that religion is just an emotional crutch for the insecure.作为一个无神论者,他认为宗教不过是缺乏信心的人的精神支柱。
仿:There are a group of young adult don't go to work and their parents are the clutch for their life.
4.accessible
easy to obtain or use
搭配accessible to easily/readily accessible
例:Computers should be made readily accessible to teachers and pupils.
仿:The new technology should be easily accessible to the public.
4.glimmer
Finally, at the end, we get a glimmer of humanity.
SIGN 迹象a slight sign of something good or positive 微弱的(好)迹象;一丝,一线
例:•This month's sales figures offer a glimmer of hope for the depressed economy.
仿:She's never shown a glimmer of interest in jogging.
5.pomposity
Information can be imparted clearly and without pomposity
Pomposity means speaking or behaving in a very serious manner which shows that you think you are more important than you really are.名词自负;自命不凡
例:He hated pomposity and disliked being called a genius.
仿:Being pomposity is hard to make any progress.
Summary
be yourself when you write
write human sentences
Four articles of faith:clarity, simplicity, brevity, humanity
use:active verbs, first person I
avoid:concept nouns, long words
Reflections
今天书中这个例子很好的解释了什么叫说人话,改之前的句子就算每个词都认识可是就算重复读几遍仍然不知所云。
要做到说人话,就是按你平常说话的思考方式去写东西就好。多用主动词,第一人称,少用专用名词和晦涩的长名词。