题目
Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the onlyway to learn language.
Do you agree ordisagree with this statement
Model Answer
Studying a language in a country where it is widely spoken has many advantages. It is, therefore, a good idea to study English in a country such as Britain. However, I believe it is not the only way to learn the language.
In the first place, most students in non-English-speaking countries learn English at secondary school, and sometimes at university nowadays. Although their spoken English is not usually of a very high standard, their knowledge of grammar is often quite advanced. This is certainly useful when students come to an English-speaking country to perfect the language.
Secondly, studying the basics of English at secondary school is less stressful than learning the language while overseas. This is because students living at home do not have to worry about problems such as finding accommodation, paying for their study and living costs, and trying to survive in a foreign country where day to day living causes much stress.
However, there are obvious advantages of learning English in Britain. Every day there are opportunities to practise listening to and speaking with British people. Also, students can experience the culture firsthand, which is a great help when trying to understand the language. This is especially true if they choose to live with a British family, as exchange students for example. Furthermore, if students attend a language school full-time, the teachers will be native speakers. In this case, not only will students' speaking and listening skills improve, but attention can be given to developing reading and writing skills as well.
In general, even though it is preferable to study English in an English-speaking country, a reasonable level of English can be achieved in one's own country, if a student is gifted and dedicated to study.
生词/零使用
| 生词/零使用 | 中文 |
|---|---|
| Non-English-speaking countries | 非英语国家 |
| English-speaking country | 讲英语的国家 |
| Secondary school | 中学 |
| Knowledge of grammar | 语法知识 |
| Basics | 基础知识 |
| Stressful | 有压力的；紧张的 |
| Students living at home | 在国内/家里的学生 |
| find accommodation | 寻找住宿 |
| Pay for their study | 支付上学的费用 |
| Living costs | 生活费；生活成本 |
| Cause much stress | 带来/产生压力 |
| There are opportunities to…… | 有机会做…… |
| Firsthand | adj&adv 直接的；直接地 |
| Native speaker | 说母语人士；讲本族语的人 |
| Reasonable level | 合理的水平 |
| Gifted | 有天赋的；有才华的 |
同义词转换
- 学习……
Study
Learn - 有优势
There are many advantages in……
Have many advantages - 因此
Therefore
So - 最好做某事/某事较好
It is a good idea……
It is better to……
It is preferable - 首先
In the first place
Frstly - 非常好；优秀
Be of a high standard
Quite advanced
Be very good - 提高；完善
Perfect
Improve
Develop - 因为
This is because
Because - 每天
Day to day
Every day - 有帮助
Be a great help
Help - 上学
Attend school
Go to school - 努力学习
Be dedicated to study
Work hard
连接词/代词
Therefore
——It is, therefore, a good idea to study English in a country such as Britain.
Such as
——in a country such as Britain.
However
——However, I believe it is not the only way to learn the language.
In the first place
This is because
Also
——Also，
Furthermore
——Furthermore, if students attend a language school full-time, the teachers will be native speaker.
In this case
In general
高级句式
Studying a language in a country where it is widely spoken has many advantages.
- 动名词作主语，含有一个定语从句
- 定语从句中的it，巧妙地指代主句中的language
Most students in non-English-speaking countries learn English at secondary school, and sometimes at university nowadays
- and 表并列
- 但并列的是只是at短语，不是句子
- 在此句中，and并列的是句子中一部分（介词短语），使用时在and前用加逗号
- 此外，体会sometimes的用法
This is certainly useful when students come to an English-speaking country to perfect the language.
- when引导的时间状语从句
- 模仿学习
This is because students living at home do not have to worry about problems such as finding accommodation, paying for their study and living costs, and trying to survive in a foreign country where day to day living causes much stress.
- because引导原因状语从句，where引导定语从句
- problems such as……后举例无数，雅思阅读中常用such problems as……
- 多项并列中and和逗号的用法
Also, students can experience the culture firsthand, which is a great help when trying to understand the language.
- which引导非限制性定语从句，when引导时间状语从句
- when从句中还用了省略
- also后加了逗号
In this case, not only will students' speaking and listening skills improve, but attention can be given to developing reading and writing skills as well
- not only, but also必用部分倒转句，据说是高级句式
- 部分倒装：指将谓语的一部分如助动词或情态动词倒装至主语之前,而谓语动词无变化。如果句中的谓语没有助动词或情态动词，则需添加助动词do, does或did，并将其置于主语之前。
- in this case，完美地衔接上句
写法解析
主体第二段的中心句不明显，主体第三段很明显，以主体第三段做解析
Secondly, studying the basics of English at secondary school is less stressful than learning the language while overseas. This is because students living at home do not have to worry about problems such as finding accommodation, paying for their study and living costs, and trying to survive in a foreign country where day to day living causes much stress.
- 第一句即为中心句。在中学学习英语知识，相比起比在海外学习英语，压力较小
- 第二句紧接着this is because做解释，这句解释很长，但是句子很好，用两种从句和并列复合出了很棒的解释
- 尽量模仿
