10月写作反馈复盘-

一、习惯问题

1)对照批改版本和原文,明确语法、用法盲点→良好的语言习惯。

2)分析错误背后的学习思路、方法和错误习惯,形成问题清单

3)体会为什么批改后的更好→建立一套自己的鉴赏、评判标准。

4)反复朗诵经过精心修改的片段,熟练至背诵→建立了自己的语言库和常用表达(以后口语、写作的时候就可以信笔写出了)

5)每次写作前一遍问题清单→犯过的错误阻止自己再犯。

6)每次写作后对照问题清单检查→让老师可以更专注于你其他地方、更高层次上语言运用的问题。

我们所谓的努力后失败是不是因为我们自以为乐地在假装努力?虚假学习后经受考验然后被击倒,如果意识不到是自己学习方法的问题,自信心就会下降了——“我语言上没有天赋”“我读了很多文章怎么没有用啊?”——然后可能怪罪努力、怪罪自己没有天生会英语……

之前看的十天学完线性代数的MIT(好像是)的学生,他总结自己的学习方法就是:自主学习阅读——自我检测——根据效果不断调整自己的学习状态、方法、找到自己薄弱的知识部分——再针对性练习——成功。知识的汲取都是这样,现在觉得输入无效,是不是输入得还不够多?是不是真正进入脑子的很少?多一些反思,并不断给自己信心去再练习、repeat,就想PID程序,每隔固定一段时间输入sample进行检验,看error在不在设定的范围内……这样就是良性循环。

二、知识积累&tips

1、The park boasts a dizzying(使人眩晕的,头晕眼花的) array of  plants, breathtaking scenery and a host of natural wonders.

2、Post-90s generation has gradually emerged as a leading force in all works of life.

3、stretch well beyond the national park's border

4、golden week× Golden Week√

5、the haze 定冠词 专指北京的雾霾

6、retention:the action of keeping sth rather than losing it for stopping it/the action of keeping liquid,heat.etc.inside sth rather than letting it escape

ex:the retention of staff the retention of information

7、agitated:showing in your behaviour that you are anxious and nervous

8、genetically modified 是通用的短语

9、without effective operation, proper regulation and tourist education

10、minimal:very small in size or amout, as small as possible.

minimally invasive surgery:微创手术

11、careless/sloppy mistake

12、swltering音节多 比较有表现力

13、inertia:lack of energy,desire or ablity to move or change

14、a throw of the feeling of inertia

15、the force of institutional inertia in the school system

16、excusable

17、emerge as a leading force in all walks of life

18、同一意思可以有很多表达,不需要逐字逐句。

19、备考需求的朋友要积累容易写错的词语

20、注意标点符号的使用

21、举例用具体的地点、时间等名词更好

22、carbon emission&coal burning 不需要连字符

23、更清晰、有主次的句子:But landslides(usually caused by torrential rain)—like the one that claimed 176(确凿数据不需要around) lives—stretch well beyond the country.

24、claim:报道中常用。to say that sth is true althoughit has not been proved and other people may not believe it./to demand or ask for sth because you believe it is your legal right to own or to have it./ask for money from the government or a company because  you have a right to it./to get or take sb's attention/to gain, win or achieve sth/(of a disaster, an accident, etc.)to cause sb's death.

25、supervison:to be in charge of sb/sth and make sure that everthing is done correctly, safely, etc. 

supervise the children

26、Much as we pride ourselves on our resilience/adaptivity, we are not fully free to make decisions that are unaffected by the baggage, for our past exerts a subtle influence on us.

independence× 略无关 应当是适应性

27、Especially when it comes to how to respond to problems, our parents have shaped us since we started to experience the world as infants/toddlers.

28、people are most likely to interested in

29、bias  unbiased 类似表示偏向

30、in career× at work√

31、a rash of problems

32、At an episode a day, the stock would last until 2019.

33、be bred/rooted in us

34、impartiality/neutrality:公正、中立、不偏不倚

35、search engines

36、back track

37、computing algorithms/machine learning 机器学习

38、as they can/as possible 更简洁

三、问题清单

1、冠词的问题 特指的事物 the

2、一位想用长句子表达更多内容,但是结构不分明,读起来很累人。

3、用词不精准,需要多看英文释义。

PS:附上以前学习的小点:

易混词汇: quality, property, feature, characteristic, peculiarity, trait, attribute, character 均有“特性,特点,品质”之意。   

[推荐表达] as/due to/since/as to/in that/for the reason that/for/now that与because意思相近,可参考使用。   

contrast: a great difference between two or more things which is clear for you to compare with.

devote近义表达有dedicate/ commit/ consecrate   

[推荐表达] instructors/educators/lecturers与teachers意思相近,可参考使用。   

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