以下是上周我们学校高二英语的周测作文题：
•书面表达（共1小题；满分25分）
•你是周明，你的学校承办了一场篮球联赛，会有外国球员和工作人员参加，需要招聘兼职英语翻译。请你用英语写一封求职信，内容包括：
•1.自我介绍；
•2.说明为什么认为自己有能力做好篮球联赛的翻译工作；
•3.表达希望应聘成功的愿望。
•注意：1.可以适当增添内容，使行文连贯；
•2.格式、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
•3.词数：100左右
下面是作文评讲课
•评分主要标准：三个任务漏掉一个，不能给16分以上；不分段作文，即使完成任务也不能给16分以上
•2.语言表达水平，体现准确性（单词拼写‘句型运用、语法）。流畅性（篇章结构’句与句的连贯‘）交际性（达到求职性的交际目的）
•
•这篇作文由三个任务组成
•1.自我介绍；
•2.说明为什么认为自己有能力做好篮球联赛的翻译工作；
•3.表达希望应聘成功的愿望。
•Para.1.
.我是李华，17岁，湛江二中高二（14）班的学生。我认为我有能胜任这份工作。我写信申请这份工作。理由如下.
•Para.2.
•1.非常喜欢篮球，了解相关的知识,掌握大量篮球方面的词汇，知道世界上知名球队和球员。
•2.非常喜欢英语，喜欢和找外国人做朋友，找他们练习英语，英语掌握得很好/能讲一口流畅的口语，
•3有丰富的兼职经验和很强的责任感，反应敏捷，懂得如何与不同兴趣和不同背景的人进行沟通，处理现场的突发事件。
•Para.3.
我相信以我的能力不会辜负你们的期盼、如果你能给我这个宝贵的机会/你能够考虑一下我，我会不胜感激。
•Step1
1.好词集锦
•1.如何表达“喜欢”“对。。。感兴趣”
•be interested in/be crazy about/be devoted to
•show great interest in/be greatly interested in
•2.如何表达“我很渴望做这份兼职”
•be keen to do/•be eager to do
•3.如何表达“适合做某事”“擅于做某事”“胜任某事”
•befit for this job/be qualified for this job
•be good at/be skilled at/be capable of/ have good performance in/have a good
command of/be expert at/have a good knowledge of /have a good mastery/grasp of
•step2.如何整合句子
•Para.1.自我介绍1：我是李华，17岁，湛江二中高二（14）班的学生，热心，有耐心。
•1.）造好中文句子，2）怎么表述，从小词组到大句子，先把主要内容翻出来
ZhangHua, a 17-year-old student, No.2 Middle SchoolClass Two, Senior Two,warm-hearted and
patient.
3）如何把它们合在一起，先要找到它们之间联系，是因果，转折，伴随，条件，还是修饰？
•找出关系来，就知道该用什么词组，或什么句型连起来了，如果是修饰名词，就要考虑用形容词（前置）、介词短语、同位语，定语从句（后置）
•My name is Zhang Hua, a 17-year-old studentfromClass Two, Senior Twoof No.2 Middle Schoo,who is warm-hearted andpatient.
••Para.1自我介绍2.我认为我能胜任这份工作。我写信申请这份工作。理由如下.
•I believe /I am sure/I am confident I’m qualified for the job,soI amwriting to apply for it. The reasons are listed as below.
•
•Para2.（理由之一）非常喜欢篮球，了解相关的知识,掌握大量篮球方面的词汇，知道世界上知名球队和球员。
•Show great interest in basktball, have some related knowledge about it,know all thebasketball terms as well as all the famous teams and players around the world
•
I’m so interested in basketball that Ihave some related knowledge aboutthe basketball,including all the basketball terms aswell as all the famous teams and players around the world
(强调句)So interested am I inbasketball ..that …
•（理由之二）非常喜欢英语，经常找外国人练习英语，能讲一口流畅的口语(句与句之间如何连贯？)
•be crazy about English, often practice Englishwith foreigners ,can speak English fluently
•I am so crazy about English that I oftenpractice English with foreigners,whichenables mespeak English fluently
•
•(理由三有丰富的兼职经验,，反应敏捷，懂得如何与不同兴趣和不同背景的人进行沟通，处理现场的突发事件) (注意句与句的关联）
•haveanexperience of working as a translator, quick-minded and can deal with all kindsof urgent cases on the spot.，know how to communicate withpeople of different interests and backgrounds
•With an experience of working as a translator, I’m quick-minded andknow how to
communicate withpeople of different interests and backgrounds,making it possibleforme to deal with anykinds of urgent cases on the spot.
•Para.3
•我相信以我的能力不会辜负你们的期盼、如果你能给我这个宝贵的机会、你能够考虑一下我，我会不胜感激
•结尾句式一：I am sure I canperfectly live up to your expectations .I will be gratefulif you could give me such a preciousopportunty
•结尾句式之二：I believemy strong
ability of communicationand myteamwork
spiritcanqualify me for the job。Ican’t wait to …and your consideration of my application will be appreciated
连句成篇
•For one thing,for another,what’s more
•On one hand,on the other hand,furthermore
•To begin with,in addition,last but not least
First of all ,besides，moreover
•Dear
Sir,
•I learned that you are looking for a part-time translator for a basketball match.
•My name is Zhang Hua, a 17-year-old student fromClass Two, Senior Twoof No.2 Middle Schoo,who is warm-hearted and patient.I believe /I am sure/I am confident I’m qualified for thejob,soI am writing to apply for it. The reasons are listed as below.
•For one thing,I’msointerested in basketballthat I know all the basketballterms, as well as all the famous teams and players around the world. Foranother, I often practice English with foreigners and can speak Englishfluently. What’s more, with an experience of working as a translator, I’mquick-minded and can deal with all kinds of urgent cases on the spot.
•Ina word, I’m convinced that I can do the job well, so I’m eager to get theopportunity.
•Looking forward to your reply.
课后练习
由于长时间看电视眼睛坏了，好多同学带起了眼睛。
Watch TV for longhours或spend long hourswatching TV
do harm to eyes或bad eyesight wear glasses
如何把它们合在一起，先要找到它们之间联系，是因果，转折，伴随，条件，还是修饰？
找出关系来，就知道改用什么词组，或什么句型连起来了。
比如这个是因果，那表因果的该用什么词组或句型呢？dueto, lead to, because of
原因状语从句或用doing作状语或with的形式
写出英文句子
Watching
TV for long hours hurts students’ eyes, so they have to wear glasses.(状从)
Watching TV for long hours, many students get a bad eyesight and have to wear glasses.(分词作状语)
With long hours spent on TV, many students get a bad eyesight and have to wear glasses. (with形式)
(Watching TV for long hours does harm to students’ eyes, which makes them wear glasses.（非限制性定从）
所以大家可以看到，无论怎么结合，都可以组成很好的句子
