1. Read of/about sth

Read about 更常见一些

2. There are some parts of theworld where even now people cannot write.

e.g. There are some of my friends who even now are single.

3. History, saga, legend的词汇互换

4. Migration 移进

emigration 移出

5. If they had any 在文中做插入语

e.g. I would buy my girlfriend a diamond ring if I had anymoney.

6. Especially flint

强调flint，especially后需稍做停顿

7.Remain（不及物动词，后面接名词、形容词）依然存在

The divisions between rich and poor remain.

替换exit或still…

8. Even the bones of the men havedisappeared without trace.

e.g. Her brand-new car, which she just bought, disappearedwithout trace.