阿里巴巴(Alibaba)是全球著名的电子商务品牌。阿里巴巴公司由马云(Jack Ma)创办于1999年,目的是提供一个开拓企业间网上贸易市场的平台。整个公司现有12家子公司。阿里巴巴希望通过网上交易,解决小企业采购、销售、管理和融资(finance)的难题。它连续5次被美国权威财经杂志《福布斯》(Forbes)评选为全球最佳的电子商务网站之一。准确的定位、稳固的结构、优秀的服务、完美的团队和坚定的信念使得阿里巴巴成为互联网时代的一个奇迹。
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Alibaba is a world-famous brand in e-commerce . Founded in 1999 by ma Yun, the company aims to provide a platform to open up the online trading market between enterprises. The whole company has 12 subsidiaries,Alibaba hopes to solve the problems of small businesses' procurement, sales, management and financing through online transactions. It have been selected in 5 consecutive years for one of the best e-commerce website globally by Forbes,the American authoritative magazine (magazine of authority).It is accurate orientation,stable structure ,nice service, perfect team and a firm belief make Alibaba a magical of the Internet age .
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Alibaba is a world famous brand of e-commerce. Founded by Jack Ma in 1999, the Alibaba Corporation aimed at providing a platform to open up online trade market among enterprises. The company now has 12 subsidiaries. Alibaba hopes to solve small enterprises' problems of purchase, sale, management and finance through online transaction. It was selected as one of the world's best e-commerce websites for five times successively by the American authoritative financial magazine Forbes. Alibaba becomes a miracle of the Internet era, due to its exact positioning, stable structure, excellent service, perfect team and firm belief.
- 子公司:subsidiaries
- 采购:purchase
- 连续5次:for five times successively
- 评选为: was selected
- 准确的定位:its exact positioning
- 稳固的结构:stable structure
- 优秀的服务:excellent service
- 完美的团队和坚定的信念:perfect team and firm belief.
1.第二句有两个分句组成,仔细分析,两个分句关系紧密,都是讲“阿里巴巴公司”,依照英文的表达习惯可将第一个分句处理为过去分词短语Founded by Jack Ma in 1999,置于句首。后一个分句“目的是…”处理为主句,增译主语the Alibaba Corporation,同时将“目的是”转译为动词短语aimed at。
2.在第四句“阿里巴巴希望…难题”中,“通过网上交易”可使用介词短语through online transaction表达,定语“采购、销售、管理和融资的”较长,处理为后置定语,用介词短语of purchase...表达,置于problems后。
3.倒数第二句的主干结构是“它被选为全球最佳的电子商务网站之一”,可以套用It was selected as one of the world's best...句型来表达。
4.最后一句中,主语部分一共有五个名词词组,如果逐字对译,则主语部分太长,译出来的句子会显得头重脚轻,仔细观察可发现,主语部分其实是“阿里巴巴成为互联网时代的一个奇迹”的原因,故不妨将其处理为 due to引导的原因状语,将“阿里巴巴成为互联网时代的一个奇迹”处理为主句。