2019-11-30 英语大作文

框架

According to the pie chart/line chart/bar char/table graph above, we can see some important changes have taken place in the past several years with regard to the number of ___________.Based on the data provided, one can see that the number of _____________has been on a rapid rise/decline all the time. In the year of _________, the number was merely__________ and it went sharply up/down to ______in _______.In the meantime, _________ has witnessed a steady increase/decrease as well,reaching __________ in ____________.(To be specific, the consumption on New Year’s gift accounts for the largest percentage (40%).However, the percentage of consumption on party, traffic and others is equal, 20%, and 20% and 20% respectively. )
Some driving factors that contribute to the above-mentioned phenomenon may be summed up, but from my point of view, the following two are of great importance. At the top of the list, with the tempo of life speeding up, ____________ has become increasingly indispensable in many people's daily life. According to a recent official report, approximately 77% ________________________. In addition, we must admit that _____________________________. Finally, the fact cannot be ignored that ________________.
Considering what has been argued so far, we can safely come to the conclusion that the trend is normal and positive. And I firmly believe that it is bound to continue in the years to come.---【好的积极现象】
Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that the trend reflected by the chart will not change in a short time. --【中性现象】

第一段 描述表格

  • 整体说明
    According to the pie chart/line chart/bar char/table graph above, we can see

静态:the different porportion of ......

动态:some important changes have taken place in the past several years with regard to the number of …

表达 描述: describe、indicate、reflect、illustrate、represent、display

  • 表述最明显
    To be specific, ... accounts for the largest percentage (40%).

表示‘占比例’:account for、make up、occupy、take up
表示 ‘比例’:percentage、proportion
表述剩余部分:…… accounts for 数字,….taking up 数字 and ….making up 数字.

表示‘增长’:rise、increase、grow、climb、go up
表示‘下降’:fall、decrease、decline、descend、drop
表示’程度’:sharply、rapidly、dramatically、steadily、gradually、slowly
表示大约:approximately

第二段 说明原因

  • 其一其二
    On the one hand, 原因一. On the other hand, 原因二

传统习俗:a traditional way of interpersonal communication
大众媒体:mass media

通用理由和常用句型:

    1. The first contributing factor is the substantially fast developing steps of China. No one can
      deny the benefits brought by Chinese economic reform since 1980s which partly lead
      to/cause/be responsible for/contribute to/account for this phenomenon.
    1. With the rapid development of technology and knowledge in domestic companies, a
      growing number of … have developed many top quality products. Therefore, the national people
      changed the attitude towards the native brands and acknowledged them.
    1. The consistent progress of the society/ the continuous development of the economy
      contributes to this phenomenon.
    1. Individuals’ desire for exploring new knowledge and widening the horizons…
    1. …has become an indispensable part in our daily life.
    1. As time goes by, ··· will show more profound significance.
    1. In the long term/run, … will facilitate to establish a harmonious society, which is necessary
      and important to our country’s development and construction.
    1. …are beneficial to individual’s improvement of …(efficiency).
    1. … are improper for individuals’ life.
    1. …enrich our soulful experiences toward humanity/society.
    1. On account of this, we can find that it is not suitable for … to ....
    1. All in all, it is obvious that the government should … to meet the demands of ...

第三段 总结

According to the analysis above, we may know that 结论.Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that the trend reflected by the chart will 预测.

选择1:总结预测,这种趋势不易改变:Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that the trend reflected by the chart will not change in a short time.
选择2:这种趋势可能改变 (一旦改变,是因为...):To sum up, there are great changes of employment of university graduates during the 10 years. With the country's economic and cultural develops, the choice of future graduates may change again.

例文

According to the pie chart above, we can see the different proportion of residents’ consumption in a Chinese city during Spring Festival. To be specific, the consumption on New Year’s gift accounts for the largest percentage (40%).However, the percentage of consumption on party, traffic and others is equal, 20%, and 20% and 20% respectively.

There are at least two fundamental causes accounting for these changes. on the one hand ... on the other hand...

To sum up, there is an upward tendency for people these days to spend money on festival presents rather than other things, which I believe will not change in a short time. To reverse the trend is not a piece of cake, which requires a good awareness of consumption value and interpersonal communication.

动态图表

According to the bar chart above, we can see the change of Chinese netizens spent on the Internet per week. The average time spent on the Internet increased steadily during these four years. It was 25 hours in December 2013, and it climbed to 26.4 in December 2016. There was a slightly rise from 26.1 hours in December 2014 to 26.2 hours in December 2015.

There are at least two fundamental causes accounting for these changes. On the one hand, Chinese people have easier access to electronic devices so that they can surf the Internet whenever and whatever they like. On the other hand,netizens can enjoy more convenient online recreations, for instance, watching movies and playing electronic games, and they prefer online-shopping provided by online stores with low price.

According to the analysis above, we may know that people in China
increasingly tend to surf the Internet. Taking all these factors into account,we may predict that the trend reflected by the chart will go up, but we should also pay attention to the negative influences as well.

动态图表2

As can be seen clearly from the line chart, it illustrates the changes of employment of University Graduates in the year of 1992 and 2002 respectively. More than anything else, the percentage of state-owned
firms decreased rapidly from 50% in 1992 to 15% in 2002, while the proportion of private firms increased sharply in the same time span. Despite the great changes, the percentage of joint-ventures remains the same,at 25%.

Theoretically, several reasons may trigger the trend that mentioned above, but for my part, the following two are of utmost importance. To begin with, it is universally admitted that state-owned firms has sprung up during this decade. With the establishment of more formalized employment system, private enterprises provide higher wages and thus attract a wide variety of outstanding graduates. Another special
consideration in this case is that people's consciousness of employment has changed. Contrary to stereotypes, state-owned enterprises are no longer the only employment option for young people.

Taking all these factors into account, we may predict that the trend reflected by the chart will not change in a short time.

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