全体新概念学员们,你们久等了!
体验过Tyger想象力写作的同学都呼精彩,却没能过瘾,这是学生的遗憾,更是Tyger所不能接受的。2018年暑假,咱们来玩玩“想象力写作”。
为何面对面?
第一,线上便捷,但确实局限,写作需要强交互。线上大班,Tyger确实做不好写作,与其做不好不如换种方式。所以Tyger决心把重量级的“想象力”写作放在线下。Tyger相信学生-家长-老师都是乐在其中,虽然较线上辛苦许多,但为了我们心中共同的期待,这些辛苦是值得的。
第二,Tyger有一个小小的“野心”,Tyger希望培养起一批英文小作家。Tyger将积极支持这批小作者投稿。为了打造这批小作家,2018年暑假集训只是一方面,在接下来的一年时间,Tyger和Landy将通力合作,统一命题,统一指导,在线直播的方式指导孩子们不少于五篇投稿级别习作。换句话说,孩子的文字变成铅字,孩子们成功的站在中国各大英语演讲舞台上的演讲稿出自自己之手,这是我们的目标。
因为此次训练营需要学员有一定的基础,所以面向Tyger线上新概念学员,需要通过面试,好消息是年龄年级不限。
集训地点:深圳.龙岗中心城.大运.
集训时间:7月初一期,8月底一期,7天/期
培训内容及安排:通过面试的同学获得
按培训课时收费:200元/小时,成人100元/小时。4小时/天
ps:本次训练营是Tyger、Landy和Melon老师承办,所以谈不上规模,相信Tyger教学品质的同学就放心过来,定不会让你失望。
pps:因为Tyger的教学研究涉及拼读-阅读-语法-写作-口语-翻译等诸多方面,本次训练营会进行串联,这也是为什么针对Tyger新概念学员的根本原因。
想象力写作范文,以飨观众
Black Seed(初一)
I was a Black Seed. I lived under the ground. Unlike lots of brothers and sisters who were green, I was black. I always felt lonely, just like the ugly duckling in her peers. When my siblings were playing, I was always asked to be a observer but not a joiner. I determined to grow to be a great tree, a unique tree.
One day,I was dug out by a little boy, it was my first my to see the outside world above the ground. With the little boy’s help, I was able to enjoy the sunshine and drink the rain. I had grown very fast, 20 years later, I became a big tree and the little boy became a handsome young man and We were all grown up.
Everything was going really well except that the boy’s wife had suffered a car severe accident and he needed a lot of money.
To save his wife and to express my gratitude to his helps in my early time, I donated my trunk to get the money to save his wife.
Misfortunes never come singly. Another crisis occurred on him. He was forced to sell everything, even my broken body. I was sad but I could understand.
Another 20 years passed, The man overcame all those difficulties and grew to be one of the riches man in the town. We saw each other again, he found me and cred, he wanted to bought me back at all cost.
Since then, we lived happily than ever never separated. Do you know who I am. I am the black seed of friendship. Once planted, it grows.
A dream(六年级)
When l was very young, I used to make the same dream.
It was a quiet afternoon, I fell asleep on my bed. In my dream, I dropped into the sea, but I wanted to swim but my arms are so heavy. I wanted to shout but my throat is dry. I cried for help, but there wasn’t anyone listened. I was so desperate to find that my body was sinking.Suddenly,I felt something jacked me up. OMG, these were millions of cars, which were very small, quite different from the normal cars. They saved me and said: "Hey, little girl, don't worry, we hear your help and you are safe now."I waked up and looked around my bed. What a dream. I want to see the cars in my dream again. From then on, I began to learn to swim. I swims a lot and I am very good at swimming now. I always wonder if I could have a continuous stories with the cars. I believe that it may come true in my new dream. Let’s dream a dream now. Good night.
(二-四年级作品)
A pan.
A black pan.
The black pan hits gray wolf.
A black pan hits gray wolf by red fox.
The gray wolf is very sad.
The red fox is very happy.
一个平底锅
一个黑黑的平底锅
这个黑黑的平底锅重重地击了一下灰太狼
原来是红太狼打灰太狼
灰太狼很伤心
红太狼很得意
A queen.
An icy queen.
Her name is Elsa.
She is sadly ditched.
She goes out on an icy day.
She is very cold.
She can see a mountain.
She builds an icy castle there.
She lives there ever since.
一个皇后
一个冰雪皇后
她的名字叫艾尔莎
她被悲惨的抛弃了。
在非常寒冷的一天,她离家出走。
她很冷。
她看到了一座雪山。
她在那家里建立起冰雪城堡。
从此,她住在了那儿。
A football.
A black football.
The black football jumped into a zoo.
The black football jumped into a zoo and sat on a fox.
The red fox was hungry then.
The red fox wanted to eat the black football.
The black football jumped and jumped.
The black football jumped by a big blue snake.
The big snake was hungry, too.
The big snake wanted to eat the black football.
The black football jumped out of the zoo.
The black football would not go to the zoo any more.
The black football was scared.
一个足球。
一个黑色的足球。
这个黑色的足球跳进了动物园。
这个黑色的足球跳进了动物园,一屁股坐在了红色狐狸身上。
这只红色的狐狸此时非常饥饿。
她想吃掉这只足球。
这只足球赶忙跳开。
它跳到了一条闪着蓝光的大蛇旁。
大蛇此时也很饿。
他也想一口把足球吃到肚子里。
黑足球赶紧跳出了动物园。
它再也不愿意去动物园了。
它真的被吓到了。
A man.
A batman.
A batman can fly.
He can see a bad man.
The batman dashes down.
The bad man is very scared.
The batman is very happy.
The batman hits bad man.
The bad man is mad.
I am your dad.
The bad man hits batman.
The batman is very sad.
蝙蝠侠
蝙蝠侠能飞
他看到了一个坏蛋
蝙蝠侠朝坏蛋俯冲过去
坏蛋非常害怕
蝙蝠侠很得意
蝙蝠侠教训了这个坏蛋
坏蛋勃然大怒
我是你爸爸
坏蛋教训了蝙蝠侠
蝙蝠侠很伤心
The mouse.
The biggest mouse.
The biggest mouse catches a cat.
The biggest mouse catches a cat for its pet.
The mouse asks the cat to jump.
The cat jumps.
The mouse asks the cat to eat.
The cat eats.
The mouse asks the cat to shout.
The cat shouts.Ha, Ha, Ha
The cat becomes the biggest cat, then he eats the mouse.
一只老鼠
一只最大的老鼠
这只最大的老鼠抓到了一只猫
这只最大的老鼠抓到这只猫,把它当宠物
老鼠让猫跳
猫乖乖的跳
老鼠让猫吃
猫乖乖的吃
老鼠让猫叫
猫叫了
突然间,猫变成了最大的猫
它把这只最大的老鼠吃掉了
A computer.
A robot computer.
The robot computer and a mouse are good friends.
A man buys the mouse.
The robot computer cries.
The robot computer baidus the man's house.
The robot computer knocks at the man's door.
The man is afraid.
He returns the mouse to the robot computer.
一台电脑
一台机器人电脑
这台机器人电脑和鼠标是好朋友
一个人买走了鼠标
机器人电脑哭了
机器人电脑百度一下那人的住所
机器人电脑敲了那个的房门
那人很害怕
他把鼠标还给机器人电脑
A pencil.
A color pencil.
A boy sharpens the pencil to write.
The pencil gets shorter and shorter.
The pencil cries.
The boy throws it away.
A girl finds the pencil on her way to school.
The girl draws a pencil with the pencil.
Wow!The pencil on the paper becomes real.
The girl is very happy.
一只铅笔
一只彩色铅笔
一个男孩削尖铅笔写字
铅笔变得越来越短
铅笔哭了
男孩却把铅笔扔了
一个女孩在上学的路上捡到了这只铅笔
这个女孩用这只短得不能再短的铅笔画了另外一只铅笔
哇!
画中的铅笔居然变成了真正的铅笔
这个女孩子非常开心
A door.
A magic door.
Nobody ever enters the magic door.
One day, Tom and I play Hide and Seek.
Tom is coming up.
And I have no way out.
I push the door open.
Tom comes here, look around and leaves quickly.
So weird, I was just beside him.
How could he ignore me?
Am I invisible to him?
一扇门
一扇神奇的门
没人走进过这扇神奇的门
一天, 汤姆和我玩捉迷藏的游戏
眼看汤姆就要过来了
我却无处可躲
我急忙推开了这扇门
汤姆过来了,左瞧瞧又看看,又离开了
真奇怪,我就站在他身边啊
他怎么无视我呢?
难道我变成了隐形人人
A taxi.
A flying taxi.
A flying taxi flies.
A flying taxi flies to the sun.
A flying taxi sees a rocket.
A flying taxi knocks into the rocket.
No, taxi, no.
A flying taxi breaks up.
Bam, Bam, Bam
The Earth cries.
一辆出租车
一辆飞行出租车
这条飞行出租车飞呀飞
它飞向了太阳
它看到了火箭
它突然撞向了火箭
不要啊,出租车
出租车分崩离析
砰,砰,砰
地球妈妈哭了
A dog.
The dog can fly.
The dog flies into the sky.
The dog can see.
The dog can see a flock of birds.
The dog play with the birds.
Oh, no. No fires.
The dog drops, drops and drops.
The dog unfold his wings.
The dog is so cool.
一条狗
这条狗会飞
这条狗飞上了天
它看见了一群鸟
它飞舞着和鸟群玩耍
噢,不好
喷火器喷火了
这条狗开始往下掉
飞狗不慌不忙伸开了翅膀
这条飞狗真酷
A skeleton.
A bloody skeleton.
The bloody skeleton goes to school.
The bloody skeleton eats kids.
Buildings collapse.
The playground explodes.
A big bang
The skeleton is dead.
一具骷髅人
一具血淋淋的骷髅人
这个骷髅人去了学校
他吃小孩
校舍倒塌了
操场爆炸了
一声巨响
骷髅人死了
A chair.
A jumping chair.
The jumping chair jumps in a tree.
The jumping chair is happy.
The jumping chair jumps onto a roof.
The jumping chair is happier.
The jumping chair jumps on top of a pole.
Oops!
The jumping chair loses its balance.
The jumping chair cries.
It has a broken broken leg and cannot jump any more. 一张椅子
一张跳跳椅
这张跳跳椅跳上了树
它很高兴
接着,它又跳到了屋顶
它更高兴了
这次,它要跳到一根电线杆顶端
糟糕
它一打滑,失去了平衡
跳跳椅哭了
原来它断了一条腿,再也不能跳了
A TV.
A robot TV.
A robot TV can see.
A robot TV sees a bird.
Hello, bird, can You see me?
Yes, I do.
Which channel do You like?
I want to watch bird TV.
It's really cool.
Thank you, robot TV.
You are welcome.
一台电视机
一台机器人电视机
机器人电视机可以看东西
它看到了一只小鸟
你好,小鸟,你能看见我吗?
当然
你想看哪个频道?
我想看小鸟节目
节目很精彩
谢谢你,机器人
不客气
A broom.
A flying broom.
A witch's flying broom.
The witch sees a fish on a house roof.
The witch smells the fish and eats it.
The witch sees a boy in a tree.
The witch laughs at the boy but won't help him out.
The broom feels shame for the bad witch.
He want to find a hero to he his host.
一把扫帚
一把飞行扫帚
老巫婆的飞行扫帚
老巫婆看见屋顶上晒着鱼
她闻到了鱼香味,毫不犹豫地就吃了它
老巫婆看到一个男孩困在了树上
她嘲笑男孩却不帮助男孩
飞行扫帚为巫婆的行为蒙羞
他想为自己找到新的英雄成为它的主人
A bus.
A swimming bus.
The swimming bus swims in the sea.
The swimming bus meets a fierce shark.
The shark is very angry because the bus blocks in the way.
I am angry, I want to eat you.
The bus swims and swims.
Who can help me?
An octopus blinds the shark with its ink.
The bus is saved.
They become friends ever since.
一辆汽车
一辆可以游泳的汽车
它在海里游啊游
它遇上了一头凶猛的鲨鱼
鲨鱼看到了汽车很生气,因为汽车挡住了他要去的路
鲨鱼说,我要吃了你
汽车赶紧逃离
谁能帮帮我呀?
一头大章鱼喷出了浓稠的墨汁,挡住了鲨鱼的视线
汽车被救了
它和章鱼成为了永远的朋友
A sheep.
A pink sheep.
The pink sheep smelled.
The pink sheep smelled the flowers.
The pink sheep smelled the blue flowers and sneezed.
A…A…Ah chool
Wet sheep.
A real wet mess.
The pink sheep get checked by a vet.
"No flowers" said the vet.
The pink sheep will be more careful with flowers.
一只羊
一只粉红色的羊
这只粉丝的羊闻到了花香味
这只粉丝的羊闻了一种开着蓝色的花,然后打了一个喷嚏
啊嚏
粉羊冒冷汗
真是糟糕透了
她找兽医检查检查
“下次不要这样乱闻野花了”兽医说
粉羊觉得以后确实要更加小心些。
A TV.
A speaking TV.
A speaking TV speaks all day.
Good Morning. Morning News is on.
Good, good, very good.
Good afternoon. Afternoon News is on.
Good, good, very good.
The time goes to 12. o'clock, p.m.
Oh, no
Silly TV wakes everybody.
Bad, Bad, really Bad.
一台电视机
一台可以说话的电视机
这台电视机一天到晚说个不停
早晨好,新闻早报开始了
主人觉得很好
下午好,新闻午报开始了
主人觉得非常好
午夜12点
机器人自动播出午夜新闻
吵醒了家里的所有人
主人觉得真是一台愚蠢的电视
An Iphone.
An Iphone and an Iphone shell.
The Iphone hang on a string.
Oh, no.
The Iphone rings.
The Iphone shell flies.
The Iphone flies in the Iphone shell.
Up, up, up.
"I am flying." The Iphone shouts proudly.
A wind blows.
The Iphone flips.
Down, down, down.
The Iphone and the Iphone shell are in the water.
一台Iphone手机
一台Iphone手机和Iphone手机壳
A window.
A broken window.
The broken window is part of a picture.
But it is vivid as it was real.
One day, a rabbit goes by the picture and goes by the window.
The rabbit loves the window
The next time, the rabbit comes again.
It goes nearer to the window.
The third time, the rabbit steps one by one in the middle of the window of the picture.
All of sudden, the picture cracks and the window breaks.
The rabbit falls into a long and deep hole.
What is this window actually?
A 3D trap set by hunter.
一扇窗
一扇破窗
破窗是画的局部
但它栩栩如生,像真的一样
一天, 一只兔子经过了这幅画,经过了这扇窗
这只兔子这扇窗
第二次,它又来了
这次她走得离这扇窗更近些
她觉得很安全,胆子更大了
第三次,她在画中央,窗的位置又蹦又跳。
突然,画布裂开了,窗子破了。
兔子掉进了一个很深很长的洞。
这个窗到底是什么东西?
原来是猎人设的3D陷阱。
A tiger.
A flying tiger.
A flying tiger flies to the sky.
The tiger swallows the sun, the moon and the stars.
The sky gets very dark.
Eva knows it.
Eva collects all kinds of color stones such as red, blue, purple, white and green ones.
She mixes all these stones and use the stone to fix the broken sky.
Year after year
The sky gets bright again and nobody sees the tiger again.
一个老虎
一只飞行老虎
飞老虎飞到了天上
飞虎一口就吃掉了太阳,吞掉了月亮和星星
顿时,天空一片漆黑
女娲知道了这件事
女娲收集各种彩色的石头,红、蓝、紫、白和绿色的石头。
她把各种彩色石混在一起去修补破损的天空。
她修了一年又一年
天空再次变亮了。
那只飞虎也永远消失了。
A gate.
A wooden gate.
A walking wooden gate.
The walking wooden gate goes to school.
The wooden gate is nice to children and likes to play games with children.
The woodcutter sees the wooden gate.
How nice is the wooden gate.
He wants to carry it home.
Oh, no. Poor wooden gate.
The students runs to the woodcutter and stops it.
The wooden gate is fixed to a classroom finally.
From now on, the wooden gate study with students happily.
一扇门
一扇木门
一扇可以走路的木门
这扇木门去上学
它对同学们很友好,喜欢和同学们一起玩游戏
一个伐木人看到了这扇木门
他一眼就看上了这木门
她想把木门带回家
可怜的木门
同学们阻止了伐木人
最后,同学们想了个办法,他们把木门装在了教室,作为教室的大门
从此,木门和同学们一起快乐的学习。
A bed.
A flying bed.
The flying bed flies to space.
The flying bed meets an ET.
The ET is wicked.
What's this?
The ET wants to keep the bed in space for himself.
Help, help.
But no use, the ET is very powerful.
The flying bed invites the ET to sleep on him.
The ET feels comfortable on bed.
The flying bed carries the ET to Earth.
一张床
一张飞行床
飞行床飞到了太空
它遇到了一个外星人
这个外星人很邪恶
这是什么
外星人想把这个新玩意留作自己使用
帮帮我,帮帮我
根本没用,外星人很强大
飞床邀请外星人睡在床上
外星人觉得睡在床上舒服极了
飞床把外星人带回了地球
Landy 老师 (耿素岚)
英国伯明翰大学教育研究生院访问学者,研究跨文化背景下的跨学科英语教学。
拥有英国阿尔斯特大学和瑞士酒店管理大学双硕士
曾任深圳书城外语培训中心教学总监,有丰富的高端教育和服务领域的教学和运营经验。
擅长设计“有意义的读、写、说”的互动课程,使学生在英语学习的同时,增加读书的兴趣,并学会主动分享和表达观点。
人称”口语发音教练”的Landy将用实际效果告诉你,要摆脱中式口音,只需要把口型舌位做到位,坚持练习一定会看到惊喜效果。