吴江2024初三年级第一次调研试卷英语作文解析

官方范文：

Growing up

How time flies! Now we are Grade Nine students. I feel happy and sometimes sad when growing up. Here is what I'd like to share with you.

时间荏苒，如今我们已成为九年级的学生。在成长的过程中，我时而感到快乐，时而感到悲伤。在此，我想与大家分享我的感悟。

I still remembered the day when I was in Grade 8. I failed in the English test, which made me so sad that I cried. My teacher Ms Wang noticed me and had a talk with me. She encouraged me not to lose heart.

She told me to face the difficulty bravely and try me best to overcome it. "Never give up, and you'll succeed."

记忆中，我还清楚记得八年级的那一天。在那次英语考试中，我失利了，心情沮丧至极，甚至泪水都无法抑制。王老师注意到了我，并与我进行了交谈。她鼓励我不要气馁，要勇敢面对困难，尽全力去克服。她告诉我：“永不放弃，终会成功。”

I will never forget what Ms Wang said. With her help,  I  have made progress  in  English. Meanwhile, I  have  realized  growing  up  means  knowing  how to deal with problems.

我永远不会忘记王老师的鼓励。在她的帮助下，我在英语方面取得了进步。同时，我也认识到，成长的意义在于学会如何解决问题。

升级版本：

Time flies, and now we have become grade nine students. As I grew up, I felt sometimes happy, sometimes sad. Here, I want to share something that left unforgettable memories with you.

I still remember the day in the eighth grade. In that English exam, I failed. I was so depressed that I could not even restrain my tears. My teacher, Ms.Wang, noticed me and talked to me. She encouraged me not to be discouraged, but to face the difficulties bravely, and to spare no effort to overcome them. 

She told me, " Never give up, you will succeed."I will never forget Ms.Wang's encouragement. With her help, I have made some progress in my English language. 

虚拟语气：Without her help, I would not have made such great progress in my English language.如果没有她的帮助，我的英语就不会取得这么大的进步。

At the same time, I also realized that the meaning of growth lies in learning how to solve problems.

首段高分表达：

1. How swiftly time passes! We have transitioned into junior high school as Grade Nine students. The journey of growing up brings forth a mix of joy and sorrow. Allow me to impart some reflections with you.

时间过得真快!我们已经到高中九年级的学生。成长的过程充满了喜悦和悲伤。请允许我与你分享一些感想。

2. How time flies! Now we have started high school as ninth graders As we grow up, I experience moments of happiness and sometimes sadness. Here is what I would like to share with you.(here 倒装+主语从句)

时间过得真快!现在我们作为九年级的学生开始了新生活，在我们成长的过程中，我经历了快乐的时刻，有时也经历了悲伤。以下是我想与大家分享的几点。

每天多少看一点，即使记不多，相信时间的积累，不经意你会发现路你已经走了老远：水滴石穿，靠的不是强度，而是持久的坚持。

此处在不断输出高频词汇及句型表达，期待终身学习的你跟上脚步一起进步，让它们变成你更强的垫脚石。

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